‘He Came For Me’ – C.M. Brown – Book Review by LAWonder10

December 14, 2013

What a delightful story of intrigue, adventure and romance this was! It reminded me of a different popular series but with a few different twists – of course, any weird fantasy with two romantically involved beings would have the same affect on me.


This tale was centered on a young college girl- Jazz – drawn into a totally different type of friends group… so different than her current one. It includes a mysterious young man -Seb – who quickly captures her attention and romantic interests. He is a total stranger, yet she feels safe and comfortable in his presence.

Strange things are happening all around her. Her once safe, normal life suddenly no longer appears as such. Confused and engulfed in a myriad of conflicting emotions, her curiosity takes her into life-threatening circumstances. Can she possibly survive this? It begins to seem highly doubtful

This is a fast-paced, moving, and romantic story. Jazz, unable to “sort things out” with all the confusing contradictions, and Seb, battling with unfamiliar feelings and his sense of loyalty two separate entities yet to his solemn duty.

The story ending left the reader aching for the next book of the Protector series.
The cover was don well and is an eye-catcher. The wording and descriptions were done well but with a few grammatical errors. One felt a connection to the different characters o various personality types.

My review of this book offers a solid Four & a Half Stars rating. Because of the very familiar sense of repetition and the few grammatical errors, I felt I could not offer a full Five Stars rating.

^Note: There is a sexual content at the end, therefore prohibiting me from a referral for the younger YA. It borders the New YA rating (which I feel is a ridiculous one). However, it isn’t very explicit in content. The descriptiveness is tastefully done.

I was sent this book by author for an honest review, of which I have given.


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  • Carolyn Brown December 15, 2013 at 11:21 am

    Thanks for taking the time Lu Ann to read and review, “He Came For Me”.

    Being my first novel, I understand your comments regarding grammatical errors and repetition and endeavour to overcome these weaknesses in my writing progression. I am grateful for your generous review and hope you will read “He Came For Mine”, the second book in the series. I am at present writing the third book, which is yet not titled.

    Thanks again, and Happy Christmas to you and yours.

    • LAWonder10 December 15, 2013 at 3:24 pm

      There were very few errors, It was very impressive as a first book – or even if it weren’t first book.
      It is on my FB and Twitter accounts.
      Lu Ann